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DOL 25 Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable The Titanic, which was believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land The student teacher arrives next week; it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem, "The Waste Land."

DOL 26 Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly -Many well-known writers submit articles and stories to __The Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine. Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library -"I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said,"but it's not in our library."

DOL 27 Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations -Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise fund for the decorations. Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner -Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28 Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet -I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I have ever seen, to observe Halley's Comet. Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing -Ms. Masayo asked,"Do you feel all right now Walter or do you want to go skiing?"

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DOL 33 Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library -When are these books due, Hans? SHould I bring them to the library? Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified -After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34 Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain -Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain. Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier - While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35 Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft -Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft. Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming -My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and Camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36 Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated -"There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated. Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think -The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my Mom.

DOL 37 Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain) ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Corrected: Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneapolis, MN Dear, Ms. Jeffers

DOL 38 Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy -Because the United States Constitutions sits out certain individual rights, we is all privileged to enjoy. Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew -We haven't neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flow.

DOL 39 Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner -To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner. Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 -Mr. Corazzini, who can't never start his car, took bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29th.

DOL 40 Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico -Luisa bought an antique pitcher for her cousin who is in Atlanta, which came from Mexico. Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry -Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41 Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth -Park rangers, who works in large forests, periodically set fire to marked land to encourage new growth. Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs -After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, forty years have passed, and bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42 Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination -Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trips destination. Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests -First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, invited special guests.

DOL 43 Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club -Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club? Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found -The article In Search of Spanish Galleons in the book //Shipwrecks// was written by Kiber and Rotondi, who believes they will be found.

DOL 44 Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good -Neither Rasheed or Larry want their team lose to suggest that team members didn't play well. Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked -Mr.Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school, but only individual students; as a result, the student handbook was checked.