MLDOLQ1+BrianC

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice A: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have practice.

Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment A:To ensure success, the management should require those in the project-the ones doing the experiment-to have new lab equipments.

DOL 4

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam A: Darnel doesn't have a reason to question them about the instructions, but he wants an explanation of this exam.

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project A: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had A: Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time we didn't know that she did.

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish A: The program cancellation effect, which bothered us, was the ending of the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected A: You should have heard their voices, when I told them how their vacation time would've been affected.

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration A: Regardless of what Grandpa say

DOL 7

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us A:Ron Commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhoods.

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment because we knew the definition of the word, chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game Marcus, a serious athlete, tried very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of actions in today's game.

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning The race among the three relay teams was close, none of the three teams; however gave up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world

Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans.

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert. DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite My eldest sister, who is going to live in the new east town apartments, wants you to help move in tonight.

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "if you need further information do not hesitate to ask me for more."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution Having read the novel,The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French revolution.

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Because there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country

Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip

DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia "I reviewed the book really well, so I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.

Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted Although we received 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright, Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion

Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out Regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.

DOL 16 Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood second; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.

Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking the together.

DOL 17 Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class coucil meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?

Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and winning spirit.

DOL 18 Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see that the car was speeding.

Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here "After the race begins, take these medals to the track club located east of the school."

DOL 19 Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments

Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early

DOL 20 Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican Yes, they're going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether they are Democrat or Republican.

Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what the tv show classic cars reports This car, 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what the TV show, Classic Cars Reports.

DOL 21 Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.

Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old They mentioned, "I believe that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old."

DOL 22 Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated