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DOL 25

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.

Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, __The Waste Land__.

DOL 26

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.

Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

DOL 27

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations.

Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet I remember when my neighbor had set up the largest telescope I had ever seen to observe Halley's comet.

Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel

DOL 33

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?"

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified After The Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain.

Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.

Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming Since my Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.

Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think The World Series, though often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for my mom and me.

DOL 37

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois Mn

Dear Ms Jeffers,

DOL 38

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy Because the United States Constitution set out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.

Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.

DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner To be allowed to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room and help my Mom fix dinner.

Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 Mr. Corazzini, who can't even start his car, was taken by bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin who lives in Atlanta.

Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry Oscar, please seat these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41

Sentence 1: park rangers who work in large forests periodically set fire to make lands to encourage new growth Park ranges, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth.

Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miravle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, though, forty years later, bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42 (G still needs)

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trips' destination.

Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests First, Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43 (D still needs)

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Do Juan and David's ownership of this Sailboat entitle the two of them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?

Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found The article in search of Spanish galleons in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kober and Rotondo, who believe that it will be found.