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DOL 3

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice

Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment

Corrected: 1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes, on this team, believe no one should practice. 2. To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the projects - the ones doing the experiment - to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project

Corrected: 1. Darnel doesn't have no reason to question their instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam. 2. I and Olga went downtown to but new notebooks for class and our long term project.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish

Corrected: 1."Yes, Terri won the game but at that time we didn't know that she had." 2. The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacation time would be effected

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration Corrected: 1. You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected. 2. Regardless what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide

Corrected: 1. Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us. 2. Because neither Ben nor I hadn't read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word, chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning

Corrected: 1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard, so I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. 2. The race among the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world

Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners

Corrected: 1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated "Within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity." 2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whomever borrowed her new sweater, have to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert

Corrected:1. Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans. 2. I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of the our girls to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information Corrected: 1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving tonight. 2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Corrected: 1.Having read the novel, __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. 2. There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills or go to my friends concert,

DOL 13

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country

Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip

Corrected: 1.Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped maintain peace in that country. 2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a place ticket to the United States. DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia

Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted Corrected: 1. "I reviewed the book well, so I received a good grade on the report", said Sonia. 2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of show last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away

Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out

Corrected: 1. He was incidentally unable to attend our fifteen high-school reunion because he lived too far away. 2. Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet, will be sold.

DOL 16

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil

Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have any problem walking them to together

Corrected: 1. You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil. 2. Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have no problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government

Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit

Corrected: 1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he off to student government? 2. There are three qualities that give this field hockey them the advantage in the league; a terrific goalie, a great offense and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding

Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here

Corrected: 1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible to see the the speeding car. 2. After the race began Delia take these medals to the tack club on the east of the school. DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments

Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early Corrected: 1. "Nothing could be further away from the truth," Mr, Perez stated, "than your comments." 2. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when sh earned her doctorate; consequently, she had begun her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican

Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports Corrected: 1. "Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican." 2. This car, a 1996 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what the TV show, Classic cars. DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow

Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old

Corrected: 1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice. 2. They mentioned on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated

Corrected: 1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do you homework and learn as much as possible. 2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.