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__Sentence 1:__ the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
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__Sentence 2:__ the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land.__

__Sentence 1:__ a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine.
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__Sentence 2:__ i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library "I am very eager to read the French novel __The Plague__," Carmen said, "But it's not in our library."

__Sentence 1:__ everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
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__Sentence 2:__ having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.

__Sentence 1:__ i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope the larger I had ever seen to observe Halleys Comet.
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__Sentence 2:__ ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel all right now Walter? Can you go skiing?"

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__Sentence 1:__ when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library When are these books due, Han? Should I bring them to the library?
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__Sentence 2:__ after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constituion of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

__Sentence 1:__ much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
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__Sentence 2:__ while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier While half the class uses the Internet, the test will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

__Sentence 1:__ oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.
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__Sentence 2:__ since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming My Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

__Sentence 1:__ there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice, "Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.
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__Sentence 2:__ the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.

__Sentence 1__: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
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Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois, MN

Dear Ms. Jeffers,

__Sentence 1:__ because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.
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__Sentence 2:__ we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.

__Sentence 1:__ to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help mom fix dinner.
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__Sentence 2:__ mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.

__Sentence 1:__ luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Luisa brought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta.
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__Sentence 2:__ oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.