MLDOLQ2+DongMyung


 * __DOL 25__

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable**

Corrected 1: The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.


 * Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land**

Corrected 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, __The Waste Land__.


 * __DOL 26__

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly**

Corrected 1: Many well known writers submin articles and stories to __The Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine.


 * Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library**

Corrected 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."


 * __DOL 27__

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations**

Corrected 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.


 * Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner**

Corrected 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.


 * __DOL 28__

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet**

Corrected 1: I remembered when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the larger I had ever seen to observe Halley's Comet.


 * Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing**

Corrected 2:Ms. Masayo asked "Do you feel alright now Walter? or do you want to go skiing?"


 * __DOL 33__

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library**

Corrected 1: When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?


 * Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified**

Corrected 2: After The Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States,almost three years passed before it was ratified.


 * __DOL 34__

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain**

Corrected 1: Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.


 * Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier**

Corrected 2: While half the class uses the internet, the rest will studies the Smithsonian Magazines that are different than the ones we used earlier.


 * __DOL 35__

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft**

Corrected 1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report, because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.


 * Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming**

Corrected 2: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.


 * __DOL 36__

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated**

Corrected 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continues to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.


 * Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think**

Corrected 2: The World Series, although often exciting


 * __DOL 37__

Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)**

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,


 * DOL 38

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy**

Corrected 1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.


 * Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew**

Corrected 2: We don't have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play we lost so many actors to fly.


 * DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner**

Corrected 1: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my mom fix dinner.


 * Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29**

Corrected 2: Mr. Corazzini who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, Octobor 29.


 * DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico**

Corrected 1: Luisa bought a antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin who is in Atlanta.


 * Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry**

Corrected 2: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.


 * DOL 41

Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth**

Corrected 1: Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth.


 * Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs**

Corrected 2: After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.


 * __DOL 42__

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination**

Corrected 1: Differences between eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.


 * Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests**

Corrected 2: First, Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.


 * DOL 43

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club**

Corrected 1: Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?


 * Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found**

Corrected 2: The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book, __Shipwrecks__,was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the galleon will be found.