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DOL 25 Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Correct: Although the Titanic was believed to be unsinkable, it carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Correct: The student teacher arrives next week; it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land__.

DOL 26 Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Correct: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine. Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Correct: "I am very eager to read the French novel __The Plague__," Carmen said,"but it's not in our library.

DOL 27 Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Correct: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations. Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Correct: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28 Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet Correct: i remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope; it was the largest Halley's Comet I had ever observed. Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Correct: Ms Masayo asked,"do you feel all right now Walter or do you not want to go skiing."

DOL 29-32 SKIP

DOL 33 Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library Correct: When are these books due and should I bring them to the library? Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified Correct: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 the constitution of the United States was drafted almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34 Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Correct: It depends on wether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier Correct:While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the __Smithsonian__ magazines; which are different than the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35 Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Correct: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft. Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming Correct: Since my mom likes: canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36 Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated Correct: "There are some athletes who rarely play, but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed the new principal stated. Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think Correct: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.

DOL 37 Sentence 1: Ms Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneapolis, MN Dear Ms Jeffers,

DOL 38 Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy Correct: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew Correct: We have niether the time or the ability to practice the play because we lost so many to the flu.

DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner Correct: To be allowed to go to the party I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner. Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 Correct: Mr. Corazzini who can never start his car took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40 Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Correct: Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlanta. Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry Correct: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41 Correct: Park Rangers who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked loads to encourage new growth Correct: After the discovery of Penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42 (G still needs) Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Correct: Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination. Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests Correct: First, Felicia planned the party; second, deciding on decorations; third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43 (D still needs) Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Correct: Do Juan and David's ownership of this Sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club? Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found Correct: The article in "Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the Galleon will be found.