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DOL 25

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land

Corrected Sentence 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves, despite the beliefs that it was unsinkable. Corrected Sentence 2: The student teacher arrives next week, and it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem "The Waste Land".


 * DOL 26**

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library

Corrected Sentence 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly,__ a renowned magazine. Corrected Sentence 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

DOL 27

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner

Corrected Sentence 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance, therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations. Corrected Sentence 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet

Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing

Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope and I saw the Halley's comet. Corrected Sentence 2: Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel alright now Walter or don't you want to go skiing?"

DOL 33

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due,Hans? Should I bring them to the library? Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years before it was ratified.

DOL 34

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain

Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier

Corrected Sentence 1: Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitudes when you climb the mountain. Corrected Sentence 2: While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft

Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming

Corrected Sentence 1: Oh, we haven't finished with our group book report, because no one had a copy of Marie's draft. Corrected Sentence 2: My mom likes canoeing in the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think

Corrected Sentence 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated. Corrected Sentence 2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.

DOL 37

Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)

ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Corrected Sentence 2:

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneapolis, MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,

DOL 38

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew

Corrected Sentence 1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. Corrected Sentence 2: We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.

DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29

Corrected Sentence 1:To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help mom fix dinner. Corrected Sentence 2: Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry

Corrected Sentence 1: Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta. Corrected Sentence 2: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41 Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forats periodically set fire to worked land to encourage new growth Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much resistant to drugs

Corrected Sentence 1: Park rangers who work in large forests periodically set fires to marked lands in order to encourage new growth. Corrected Sentence 2: After the discovery of penicillia, very many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, though forty years have passed, bacteria are becoming much more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests

Corrected Sentence 1: Differences among the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trips' destination. Corrected Sentence 2: First, Felicia planned the party; second decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found

Corrected Sentence 1: Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to a membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club? Corrected Sentence 2:The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe it will be found.

DOL 44

Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked

Corrected Sentence 1: Neither Rasheed nor Larry want their team's loss to suggest that the team members didn't play well. Corrected Sentence 2: Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not affect the entire school but only individual students, the student handbook was changed.

DOL 45 Sentence 1: It says here on the bottle label that the baddest reaction to this heare medicine would be drowsiness so your alright Sentence 2: at the beginning of class Ms Keaney took attendance assigns new work and homework was checked

Corrected Sentence 1: It says on the bottle label that the worst reaction to the medicine would be drowsiness, so you're all right. Corrected Sentence 2: At the beginning of class, Ms Keaney took attendance, assigned new work and checked homework.