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DOL 25 Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Once believed to be unsinkable, the Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land The student-teacher arrives next week; it is necessary to finish reading //Eliots//, a long poem, and //The Waste Land//.

DOL 26 Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Many well known writers submit articles and stories to The Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine. Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library "I am eager to read the French novel, the Plague," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

DOL 27 Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Everyone in this grade are responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we must all raise funds for the decoration. Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28 Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I have ever seen, to observe Halley's Comet. Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Ms. Masayo asked,"Do you feel all right now Walter or do you want to go skiing?"

DOL 33 Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library "When are these books due Hans? Should I take them to the library?" Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34 Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35 Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Oh, the reason why we haven't finished our group book report is because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft. Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming My Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36 Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ashmed, the new principal, stated. Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.

DOL 37 Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain) ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois, MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,

DOL 38 Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.

DOL 39 Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner I had to finish my science project, cleaning up my room and helping my mom fix dinner before being allowed to go to the party. Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 Mr. Corazzini, who never can start his car, was taken by bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlantica. Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry Oscar, please set these book on the library table if you dont have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41 Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth. After the discovery of Penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, though, 40 years later bacteria are much more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42 (G still needs)

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Differences between eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests First, Felicia planned the pardy; second, she decided on decorations' third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43 (D still needs)

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club. Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi, who believe it will be found.