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DOL 25

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable

Corrected

1. The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.

Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land

Corrected

2. Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land__.

DOL 26

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly

Corrected

1. Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the //Atlantic Monthly//, a renowned magazine.

Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library

Corrected

2. "I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague, "Carmen said, "but it is not in our library."

DOL 27

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations

Corrected

-Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.

Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner

Corrected

- Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet

Corrected

1. I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen to observe halleys.

Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing

Corrected

2. Ms. Massayo asked, "Do you feel alright now Walter or don't you want to go skiing?"

DOL 33

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library

Corrected

1. When are these books due, Hans? Should I bring them to the library?

Sentence

2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

Corrected

2. After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain

Corrected

1. Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.

Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier

Corrected

2. While half of the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonia Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft

Corrected

1. Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.

Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming

Corrected

2. My mom likes canceling on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montant, and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated

Corrected

1. There are some athletes who rarely play, but continue to practice Mrs. Ahmed the new principal stated.

Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think

Corrected

2. The world series, although often exciting, sometimes, is too slow placed for my mom and I.

DOL 37

Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)

ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Corrected

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois mn

Dear Ms. Jeffers,

DOL 38

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged too enjoy

Corrected

1. The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.

Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew

Corrected

2. We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.

DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner

Corrected

1. In order to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my mom fix dinner.

Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29

Corrected

2. Mr. Corazzini, who cannot start his car, was taken by bus to Dulles airport on tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico

Corrected

1. Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta.

Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry

Corrected

2. Oscar, please set these books on the library table; if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41

Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth

Corrected

1. Park rangers, who wards in large forests, periodically set fires to marked lands to encourage new growth.

Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs

Corrected

2. After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared ironically through 40 years later, bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drug.

DOL 42

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination

Corrected

1. Differences among the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.

Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests

Corrected

2. First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club

Corrected

1. Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?

Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found

Corrected

2. The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written b Kiber and Rotondi who believed it will be found.

DOL 44

Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good

Corrected

1. I neither Rashed nor Larry want their team's loss to suggest that team members didn't play well.

Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked

Corrected

2. Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but individual students, the student handbook was changed.

DOL 45

Sentence 1: it says here on the bottle label that the baddest reaction to this here medicine would be drowsiness so your alright.

Corrected

1. It says on the bottle label that the worst reaction to this medicine would be drowsiness, so you are alright.

Sentence 2: at the beginning of class Ms. Kenney took attendance assigns new work and homework was checked

Corrected

2. At the beginning of class, Ms. Kenny took attendance, assigned new work, and checked homework.