MLDOLQ1+DongMyung


 * __DOL 3__**
 * Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice**

Correction 1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.


 * Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment**

Correction 2: To ensure success, teachers should require those in the project - the ones doing the experiment to have the new lab equipment.


 * __DOL 4__**


 * Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam**

Correction 1: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.


 * Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project**

Correction 2: Olga and I went downtown, bought new notebooks for class and for our long term project.

__**DOL 5**__


 * Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had**

Correction 1: Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didnt know that she won.


 * Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish**

Correction2: The affect of the program was canceled, which bothered mos of the members to and the project before they could finish.


 * __DOL 6__**


 * Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected**

Correction: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.


 * Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration**

Correction: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.


 * __DOL 7__

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us**

Corrected 1: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome the children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us.


 * Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide**

Corrected 2: Neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word chide.

__**DOL 8**__


 * Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game**

Corrected 1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard and I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.


 * Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning**

Corrected 1: The race among the three relay teams, is close; however none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.


 * __DOL 9__

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world**

Corrected 1: Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, 'Within a short time free-election laser will change the world as much as the invention of electricity changed the world.'


 * Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners**

Corrected 2: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrows her new sweater will have to take it to the cleaners.


 * __DOL 10__

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans**

Corrected1: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.


 * Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert**

Corrected 2: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert. __**DOL 11**__


 * Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite**

Corrected 1: My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.


 * Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information**

Corrected 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

__**DOL 12**__


 * Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution**

Corrected 1: Having read the novel, __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.


 * Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert**

Corrected 2: There were too many things to do, so I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, nor go to my friend's concert.

__**DOL 13**__


 * Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country**

Corrected 1: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.


 * Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip**

Corrected 2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.


 * __DOL 14__

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia**

Corrected 1: "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.


 * Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted**

Corrected 2: "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.


 * __DOL 15__

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away**

Corrected 1: He was ,incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.


 * Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out**

Corrected 2: Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, __Romeo and Juliet__,will be sold out."


 * __DOL 16__

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil**

Corrected 1: You should have followed the three steps; first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.


 * Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together**

Corrected 2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

__**DOL 17**__


 * Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government**

Corrected 1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might come have the class council meeting, at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government?


 * Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting**

Corrected 2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league : a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.


 * __DOL 18__

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding**

Corrected 1: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.


 * Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here**

Corrected 2: After the race begins Delia, take these medals to the track club at the school east side of here.


 * __DOL 19__

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments**

Corrected 1: "Nothing could be further from the truth than your comments" Mr. Perez stated," than your comments."


 * Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early**

Corrected 2: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

__**DOL 20**__


 * Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican**

Corrected 1: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican.


 * Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports**

Corrected 2: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show, __Classic Cars Reports__.


 * DOL 21**


 * Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow**

Corrected 1: Because it snowed heavily last night, its all right if no one comes to the basketball practice.


 * Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old**

Corrected 2: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was 75 years old.


 * __DOL 22__

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible**

Corrected 1: Follow some simple rules you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.


 * Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated**

Corrected 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.