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DOL 25

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Sentence 1: The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.

Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Sentence 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, we should finish reading Eliot's long poem, //The Waste Land//.

DOL 26

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Sentence 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the //Atlantic Monthly//, a renowned magazine.

Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Sentence 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel //The Plague//," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

DOL 27

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Sentence 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations.

Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Sentence 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner

DOL 28

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet

Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing

DOL 29

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

DOL 29-32 SKIP

DOL 33 Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library Sentence 1: "When are these books due Hans? Should I take them to the library?"

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

DOL 34 Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Sentence 1: Much depends on wheter you're effected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.

Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier Sentence 2: While half the class used the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35 Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Sentence 1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because noone had a copy of Marie's draft.

Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming Sentence 2: My mum likes canoeing on the YellowStone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36 Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated Sentence 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice." Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.

Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think Sentence 2: The World Series, although often exciting, is sometimes too slow paced for me and my mom.