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Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable** 1. The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. 2. Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, __The Waste Land__.
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 * Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land**

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly** 1. Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine. 2. "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it is not in our library."
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 * Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library**

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations** 1. Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations. 2. Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
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 * Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner**

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet** 1. I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest of I had ever seen to Halley's Comet. Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel alright now, Walter or dod you want to go ski?"
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 * Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing**

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library** 1. "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?" After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
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 * Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified**

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain** 1. Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. 2. While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the __Simthsonian__ magazines that are different than the ones that we used earlier.
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 * Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier**

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft** 1. Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft. 2. My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
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 * Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming**

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated** 1. "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated. 2. The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
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 * Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think**

Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)** Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois, MN Dear Ms. Jeffers
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Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy** The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. We have neither the time or the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.
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 * Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew**

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner** To be allowed to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner. Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29.
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 * Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29**

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico** 1. Lusia bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlanta. 2. Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
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 * Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry**

Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth** 1. Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth. 2. After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
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 * Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs**

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination** 1. Differences between eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination. 2. First, Felicia planned the party; secondly, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
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 * Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests**

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club** 1. Dou Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club? 2. The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the galleons will be found.
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 * Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found**