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Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice

Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have any practice.

Sentence 2: To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project - the ones doing the experiment - to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question those instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam.

Sentence 2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Yes, Terri won the game, but all this time we didn't know that she has.

Sentence 2: The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration

Corrected:

Sentence 1: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.

Sentence 2: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Rob commented that us neighbors have got to be welcoming children outside our neighborhood.

Sentence 2: Because neither Ben nor I have read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Marcus is a serious athlete who tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.

Sentence 2: The race among the three relay teams is close;however, none of them are giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world

Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electron lazers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."

Sentence 2: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans.

Sentence2: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information

Corrected:

Sentence 1: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.

Sentence 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Having read the novel __The Man in the Iron Mask,__ I want to find out more about the French Revolution.

Sentence 2: Because there were too many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country

Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.

Sentence 2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Samantha requested a plane ticket to the United States.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia

Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted

Corrected:

Sentence 1: "I reviewed the book well, and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.

Sentence 2: "Although we had twenty-five inches of show last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away

Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out

Corrected:

Sentence 1: He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high-school reunion because he lives too far away.

Sentence 2: Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play __Romeo and Juliet__ will be sold out.

DOL 16

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil

Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together

Corrected:

Sentence 1: You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last add more oil.

Sentence 2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government

Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 PM or was he off student government?

Sentence 2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding

Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.

Sentence 2: After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the east side of the school.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments

Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early

Corrected:

Sentence 1: "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."

Sentence 2: She was quite young, no more than 26, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican

Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican.

Sentence 2: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow

Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.

Sentence 2: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated

Corrected:

Sentence 1: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.

Sentence 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.