MLDOLQ1+Claire

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3 Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice Corrected: Mr. Paionia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should practice. Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment Corrected: To ensure success, the management should require those in the project-the ones doing the experiment-to have new lab equipment in the project.

DOL 4 Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam Corrected: Darenl doesn't have any reason to question those instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam. Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project Corrected: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and for our long term project.

DOL 5 Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had Corrected: Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time we didn't know that she had. Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish Corrected: The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish it.

DOL 6 Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacation time would be effected Corrected: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected. Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration Corrected: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7 Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us Corrected: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome to children from outside of our neighborhood. Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide Corrected: Because neither Ben or I have not read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the world chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game Corrected: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning Corrected: The race among the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world Corrected: Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity." Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners Corrected: Yesterday, Mom told us that whomever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans Corrected: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans. Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert Corrected: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite Corrected: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants you're help moving in tonight. Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information Corrected: At the end of her speech, Amanda said "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution Corrected: Having read the novel //The Man in the Iron Mask//, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Corrected: Because there were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills or go to my friends concert.

DOL 13 Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country Corrected: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country. Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip Corrected: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Samantha requested a plane ticket to the United States.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia Corrected: "I reviewed the book well, and I received a good grade on the repor," said Sonia. Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of snow last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted Corrected: "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away Corrected: He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high-school reunion, because he lives too far away. Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out Corrected: Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play //Romeo and Juliet// is sold out.

DOL 16

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil Corrected: You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; last, add more oil. Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together Corrected: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government Corrected: Does Caroline know whether Raul might've come to the class council meeting at 6:00p.m. or is he was off of student government?

Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit Corrected: Threre are three qualities that exist that gives this field hockey team, the better advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding Corrected: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here Corrected: "After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the east side of the school."

DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments Corrected: "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than you comments." Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early Corrected: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican Corrected: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican. Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports Corrected: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow Corrected: Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice. Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old Corrected: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building became seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible Corrected: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible. Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated Corrected: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.