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DOL 25

__Sentence 1__: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable - The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. __Sentence 2__: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land - Because the student teacher arrives next week, we need to finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land.__

DOL 26

__Sentence 1__: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly - Many well-known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine. __Sentence 2__: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library - "I am very eager to read the French novel __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

DOL 27

__Sentence 1__: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations - Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore we must all raise funds for the decorations. __Sentence 2__: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner - Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.

DOL 28

__Sentence 1__: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet - I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen while observing Hally's Comet. __Sentence 2:__ ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing - Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel all right now, Walter? Don't you want to go skiing?".

DOL 29

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library - Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified DOL 29-32 SKIP

DOL 33

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

DOL 34

__Sentence 1__: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain - Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. __Sentence 2__: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier - While half the class use the Internet, the rest study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.

DOL 35

__Sentence 1__: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft - Oh, we haven't got finished with our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's Draft. __Sentence 2__: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming - My Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

DOL 36

__Sentence 1__: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated - "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated. __Sentence 2__: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think - The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my Mom.

DOL 37

__Sentence 1__: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain) ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneapolis, MN Dear, Ms. Jeffers

DOL 38

__Sentence 1__: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy - Because the United States Constitutions sets out certain individual rights, we are all privileged to enjoy. __Sentence 2__: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew - We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.

DOL 39

__Sentence 1__: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner - To be allowed to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room and help my Mom to fix dinner. __Sentence 2__: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 - Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.

DOL 40

__Sentence 1:__ luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico - Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta. __Sentence 2__: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry - Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.

DOL 41 __Sentence 1__: Park Rangers who work in large forests priodicallty set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth. __Sentence 2:__ After the discovery of penicillia, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, through40 years have past, bacteria are becoming much more resistant to drugs.

DOL 42

__Sentence 1:__ because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination - Differences among the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trips. __Sentence 2__: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests - First, Felicia planned the party, second, she decided on decorations, third, she invited special guests.

DOL 43

__Sentence 1__: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club - Do Juan and David's ownerships of this Sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club? __Sentence 2:__ the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found - The article of "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe it will be found.

DOL 44

__Sentence 1:__ neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good - Neither Rasheed nor Larry want their teams' loss to suggest that team members didn't play well. __Sentence 2__: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked - Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not affect the entire school, but only individual students, student handbook being checked.