MLDOLQ2+Jason


 * __DOL 25__

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable** Corrected: The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.

Corrected: Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, __The Waste Land__.
 * Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land**


 * __DOL 26__

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly** Corrected: Many well known writers submin articles and stories to __The Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine.

Corrected: "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
 * Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library**


 * __DOL 27__

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations** Corrected: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.

Corrected: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
 * Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner**


 * __DOL 28__

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet** Corrected: I remembered when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the larger I had ever seen to observe Halley's Comet.

Corrected:Ms. Masayo asked "Do you feel alright now Walter? or do you want to go skiing?"
 * Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing**

DOL 29-32 SKIP


 * __DOL 33__

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library** Corrected: When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?

Corrected: After The Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States,almost three years passed before it was ratified.
 * Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified**


 * __DOL 34__

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain** Corrected: Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.

Corrected: While half the class uses the internet, the rest will studies the Smithsonian Magazines that are different than the ones we used earlier.
 * Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier**


 * __DOL 35__

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft** Corrected: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report, because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.

Corrected: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
 * Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming**


 * __DOL 36__

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated** Corrected: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continues to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.

Corrected: The World Series, although often exciting
 * Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think**


 * __DOL 37__

Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)**

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,


 * DOL 38

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy** Corrected: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.

Corrected: We don't have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play we lost so many actors to fly.
 * Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew**


 * DOL 39

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner** Corrected: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my mom fix dinner.

Corrected: Mr. Corazzini who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, Octobor 29.
 * Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29**


 * DOL 40

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico** Corrected : Luisa bought a antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin who is in Atlanta.

Corrected: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
 * Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry**


 * DOL 41

Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth** Corrected : Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth.

Corrected: After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
 * Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs**