MLDOLQ2+SangWoo

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Corrected DOL#25 Correct 1: The Titanic carried more then 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable. Correct 2: The student teacher arrives next week; it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land__.
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Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Corrected DOL#25 correct 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the //Atlantic Monthly//, a renowned magazine. correct 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel //The Plague//," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
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Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Corrected DOL# 27 correct 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations. correct 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
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Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Corrected DOL# 28 correct 1: I remember when my neighbor, he set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen to observe Halleys Comet. correct 2: Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel alright now Walter or Dont you want to go skiing?"
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Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified Corrected DOL#29 correct 1: When are these books due,Hans? Should I bring them to the library? correct 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years before it was ratified.
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Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier Corrected DOL #30 correct 1: Mostly depends on weather, you're affected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain. correct 2: While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used ealier.
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Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming correct 1: Oh, we haven't got finished with our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's Draft. correct 2: My Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
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Sentence 1: ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers correct 1: Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneapolis, MN Dear, Ms. Jeffers
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Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew correct 1: Because the United States Constitutions sits out certain individual rights, we is all privileged to enjoy. correct 2: We haven't neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flow.
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Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 correct 1: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner. correct 2: Mr. Corazzini, who can't never start his car, took bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29th.
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Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry correct 1: Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta. correct 2: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
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Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations third she invited special guests correct 1: Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trips destination. correct 2: First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, invited special guests.
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Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
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