MLDOLQ1+SooJin

Daily Oral Language Soojin Kim

__DOL 1:__ NA

__DOL 2__: NA

__DOL 3__

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
 * Corrected sentence #1**: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** To ensure success, the teachers should require the ones - doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment in the project.

__DOL 4__

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Darnel has no reason to question the instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks needed for class and our long-term project.

__DOL 5__

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time we didn't know that she had.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of our members to end the project before we could finish.

__DOL 6__

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
 * Corrected sentence #1:** You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Irregardless of what Grandpa says, It'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.

__DOL 7__

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside from our neighborhood he mentioned to us Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
 * Corrected sentence #1**: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome to children outside our neighborhood.
 * Corrected sentence #2**: Neither Ben nor I know the definition of the word "chide" because we haven't read the assignment.

__DOL 8__

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game Sentence 2: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
 * Corrected sentence #1**: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** The race among the three relay teams is close, none of the them is giving up hope of winning.

__DOL 9__

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, emphasizing on African Americans.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bright the rest of us to the concert.

__DOL 10__

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
 * Corrected sentence #1:** My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** At the end of her speech, Amanda told us that if I need further information, do not hesitate to ask her

__DOL 11__

Sentence 1: having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i coudnt finish my homework pra cticing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Having read the novel //The Man in the Iron Mask,// I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** There were too many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.

__DOL 12__

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.

__DOL 13__ Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
 * Corrected sentence #1**: Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth corp, which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped maintain peace in their country.
 * Corrected sentence #2**: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Samantha requested a plane ticket to the United States at the end of her trip.

__DOL 14__

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
 * Corrected sentence #1:** "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.

__DOL 15__

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
 * Corrected sentence #1:** He was incidentally unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion; he just couldn't make it because he lived too far away.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Irregardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespeare's play //Romeo and Juliet// will be sold out.

DOL 16 Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together


 * Corrected sentence #1:** You should have followed three steps: first,open the hood; second, check the level and lastly add more oil.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

__DOL 17__

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government?
 * Corrected sentence #2:** There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

__DOL 18__

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car speeding.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the side of school.

__DOL 19__

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early
 * Corrected sentence #1:** "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, 'than your comments."
 * Corrected sentence #2:** She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate consequently; she began her career early.

__DOL 20__

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** This car, a 1996 Mustang, extremely valuable now, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars report.

__DOL 21__

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** I believe that they mentioned on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

__DOL 22__

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.