MLDOLQ2+Stella


 * DOL 25**

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable //Corrected Sentence 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves, despite the beliefs that it was unsinkable// Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land //Corrected Sentence 2: The student teacher arrives next week, and it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem "The Waste Land".//


 * DOL 26**

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly //Corrected Sentence 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the// Atlantic Monthly//, a renowned magazine.// Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library //Corrected Sentence 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel,// The Plauge//," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."//


 * DOL 27**

Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations //Corrected Sentence 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance, therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations.// Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner //Corrected Sentence 2: Having worked for eight hours, I had to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.//


 * DOL 28**

Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet //Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope that was the largest I had ever seen// Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing

DOL 33

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library

Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due,Hans? Should I bring them to the library? Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years before it was ratified.