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DOL 3

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment

Fixed: 1. Mr. Palonia says that there are athletes on this team who believe that everyone should have practice. 2. To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project - the ones doing the experiment - to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long-term project

Fixed: 1. Darnel doesn't have any reason to question those instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam. 2. Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for the long term project in our class.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish

Fixed: 1. Yes, Terri won the game, but we didn't know that she had. 2. The effect of the program cancellation that bothered us members the most was ending the project before we finished.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration

Fixed: 1. You should have heard their voices when I told them about 2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide

Fixed: 1. Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside our neighborhood. 2. Because neither Ben nor I have read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning

Fixed: 1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. 2. The race among the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world

Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners

Fixed: 1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electron lasers would change the world as much as the invention of electricity." 2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert

Fixed: 1. Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans. 2. I think someone's mother should volunteer to brnig the rest of us to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information

Fix: 1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight. 2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hestitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert

Fixed: 1. Having read the novel __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. 2. Because there were too many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country

Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip

Fixed: 1. Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-Fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country. 2. After finishing her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia

Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted

Fixed: 1. "I reviewed the book very well, and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia. 2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away

Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out

Fixed: 1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away. 2. It says that, regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play __Romeo and Juliet__ will be sold out.

DOL 16

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil

Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together

Fixed: 1. You should have followed three steps: First, open the hood; Second, check the level; Last, add more oil. 2. Although my dog is different from yours, we don't have a problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government

Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting

Fixed: 1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M., or was he off student government? 2. There are three qualities that gives this fiel hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit..

DOL 18

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding

Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here

Fixed: 1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. 2. After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the Ease side of the school.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments

Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early

Fixed: 1. "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." 2. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; Consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican

Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports

Fixed: 1. Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally-whether democratic or republican. 2. This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow

Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old

Fixed: 1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice. 2. They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated

Fixed: 1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do you homework, and learn as much as possible. 2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be (made) more challenging," Martina stated.