MLDOLQ1+Hannah

Daily Oral Language

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1:
 * original** mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
 * corrected** Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.

Sentence 2:
 * original** to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
 * corrected** To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project doing the experiment to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

Sentence 1:
 * original** darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
 * corrected** Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.

Sentence 2:
 * original** me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
 * corrected** Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.

DOL 5

Sentence 1:
 * original** yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
 * corrected** Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that she had.

Sentence 2:
 * original** the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
 * corrected** The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

Sentence 1:
 * original** because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
 * corrected** You should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.

Sentence 2:
 * original** irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
 * corrected** Regardless of what Grandpa said, it will be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

Sentence 1:
 * original** rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
 * corrected** Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.

Sentence 2:
 * original** neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
 * corrected** Because neither Ben nor I has not read the assignment, we don't know the definition of the word chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1:
 * original** marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
 * corrected** Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I am sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.

Sentence 2:
 * original** the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
 * corrected** The race between the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1:
 * original** ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
 * corrected** Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."

Sentence 2:
 * original** yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
 * corrected** Yesterday, Mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater, has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1:
 * original** our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
 * corrected** Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.

Sentence 2:
 * original** well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
 * corrected** I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1:
 * original** my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
 * corrected** My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.

Sentence 2:
 * original** at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
 * corrected** At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:
 * original** having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
 * corrected** Having read the novel __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.

Sentence 2:
 * original** there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
 * corrected** There were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

Sentence 1:
 * original** mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
 * corrected** Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.

Sentence 2:
 * original** having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
 * corrected** Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.

DOL 14

Sentence 1:
 * original** i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
 * corrected** "I reviewed the book well, and I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia

Sentence 2:
 * original** although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
 * corrected** "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1:
 * original** he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
 * corrected** He was unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.

Sentence 2:
 * original** it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
 * corrected** Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play __Romeo and Juliet__ will be sold out.

DOL 16

Sentence 1:
 * original** you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
 * corrected** You should have followed three steps: firstly, open the hood; secondly check the level; and lastly, add more oil.

Sentence 2:
 * original** although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
 * corrected** Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1:
 * original** does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
 * corrected** Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he off student government?

Sentence 2:
 * original** there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
 * corrected** There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

Sentence 1:
 * original** walking quiet along the road it was impossible for me to see that car that was speeding
 * corrected** Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible to see the speeding car.

Sentence 2:
 * original** after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
 * corrected** After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club at school on the east side of the school.

DOL 19

Sentence 1:
 * original** nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
 * corrected** "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "Than your comments."

Sentence 2:
 * original** she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
 * corrected** She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1:
 * original** yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
 * corrected** Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.

Sentence 2:
 * original** this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
 * corrected** This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1:
 * original** because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
 * corrected** Because it snowed heavily last night, it is all right if no one comes to basketball practice.

Sentence 2:
 * original** they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
 * corrected** They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building were seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1:
 * original** follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
 * corrected** Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.

Sentence 2:
 * original** in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
 * corrected** "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.