MLDOLQ2+SooJin

Daily Oral Language Quarter 2 Soojin Kim

__DOL #25__

Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
 * Corrected sentence #1**: //The Titanic// carried more than 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** The student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem, __The Waste Land.__

__DOL # 26__

Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly__, a renowned magazine.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** "I am very eager to read the French novel, __The Plague__," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."

__DOL #27__

sentence 1: Everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations sentence 2: Having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.

__DOL #28__

Sentence #1: i remember when my neighbor he set u a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe hallyes comet Sentence #2: ms masayo aksed do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
 * Corrected Sentence #1:** I remember when my neighbor set you a huge telescope, the larger I had ever seen to observe Hallye's comet.
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** Ms.Masayo asked Walter, "Do you feel all right now or Don't you want to go skiing?"

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__DOL # 33__

Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bring them to the library Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
 * Corrected Sentence #1:** "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?"
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** The Constitutional Convention in 1787 drafted, the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.

__DOL # 34__

Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
 * Corrected Sentence #1**: Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** While half the class uses the internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different than the ones we used earlier.

__DOL # 35__

Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
 * Corrected Sentence #1**: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.

__DOL # 36__

Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
 * Corrected Sentence #1:** "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal stated.
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.

__DOL # 37__

Sentence 1: ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers

Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois, MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,
 * Corrected Sentence #1:**

__DOL # 38__

Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew Corrected Sentence #1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. Corrected Sentence #2 : We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.

__DOL # 39__

Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
 * Corrected Sentence #1:** To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner.
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday October, 29.

__DOL # 40__

Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlanta.
 * Corrected sentence #2:**"Oscar, please set these books on the library table, if you don't have a lot of things to carry."

__DOL # 41__

Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to mark lands to encourage new growth Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillia very many miracle drugs appeared, ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** After the discovery of penicillia, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically though forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.

__DOL # 42__

Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
 * Corrected sentence #1:** Differences between the eight camp counselors cause a change in the field trip's destination.
 * Corrected sentence #2:** First Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.

__DOL # 43__

Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
 * Corrected Sentence #1**:Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
 * Corrected Sentence #2:** The article 'In Search of Spanish Galleons' in the book __Shipwrecks__ was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the galleons will be found.