MLDOLQ1+BrianM


 * __DOL 3__**

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice

Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment


 * __Corrected__**

Sentence 1: Mr.Palonia says that there are some athletes in this team that believes everyone has to practice.

Sentence 2: To ensure the success, they should require to have new lab equipment for those who are doing the experiment for the project.


 * __DOL 4__**

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project


 * __Corrected__**

Sentence 1: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation of this exam.

Sentence 2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks, for class

__**DOL 5**__

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish

__**Corrected**__

Sentence 1:

Sentence 2: The effect of the program's cancellation bothered most of our member


 * __DOL 6__**

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration


 * __Corrected__**

Sentence 1: You should have heard their voice, when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.

Sentence 2: Regardless of what Grandpa says it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.


 * __DOL 7__**

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide


 * __Corrected__**

Sentence 1: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcoming the children outside of our neighborhood.

Sentence 2: Because Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.'


 * __DOL 8__**

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning


 * __Corrected__

Sentence 1: Marcus is a serious athlete

**__DOL 10__

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 * Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans**

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert >>

**__DOL 11__**

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite >>

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information >>

__**Corrected**__

Sentence 1: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight. Sentence 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."


 * __DOL 12__**

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution >>

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert >>


 * __Corrected__**

Sentence 1: Having read the novel, __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.

Sentence 2: Because, there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments

Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican

Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports

Correction

1: Yes, they are going to