MLDOLQ1+Stella


 * DOL 3**

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice //Corrected Sentence 1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should not have practice.// Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment //Corrected Sentence 2: To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project-the ones doing the experiment-to have new lab equipment.//


 * DOL 4**

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam //Corrected Sentence 1: Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation of this exam.// Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project //Corrected Sentence 2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project.//


 * DOL 5**

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had //Corrected Sentence 1: Yes, Terri won the game, but, at the time, we didn't know that she had won.// Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish //Corrected Sentence 2: The program cancellation's effect, which bothered us the most, was the ending of the project before we could finish.//


 * DOL 6**

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected //Corrected Sentence 1: You should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.// Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration //Corrected Sentence 2: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.//


 * DOL 7**

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us //Corrected Sentence 1: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.// Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide //Corrected Sentence 2: Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word "chide".//


 * DOL 8**

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game //Corrected Sentence 1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard, and I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.// Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning //Corrected Sentence 2: The race among the three relay teams is close; none of the three, however, are giving up hope of winning.//


 * DOL 9**

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world //Corrected Sentence 1: Ms. Perez, the science teacher stated, "Within a short time, free-election lasers will change the world as the invention of electricity did."// Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners //Corrected Sentence 2: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.//


 * DOL 10**

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans //Corrected Sentence 1: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans.// Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert //Corrected Sentence 2: Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.//


 * DOL 11**

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite //Corrected Sentence 1: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.// Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information //Corrected Sentence 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further informations, don't hesitate to ask me for more."//


 * DOL 12**

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution //Corrected Sentence 1: Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.// Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert //Corrected Sentence 2: There were too many things to do: practicing my soccer skills and going to my friend's concert. Therefore, I couldn't finish my homework.//


 * DOL 13**

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country //Corrected Sentence 1: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps which was assigned to Germany after World War 2, maintained peace in that country.// Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip //Corrected Sentence 2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Stella requested a plane ticket to the United States.//


 * DOL 14**

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia //Corrected Sentence 1: "I reviewed the book really well and I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.// Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted //Corrected Sentence 2: "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.//


 * DOL 15**

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away //Corrected Sentence 1: He was,incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.// Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out //Corrected Sentence 2: Regardless of the effect of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play __Romeo and Juliet__ will be sold out.//


 * DOL 16**

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil //Corrected Sentence 1: You should have followed the three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last add more oil.// Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together //Corrected Sentence 2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have a problem walking them together.//


 * DOL 17**

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government //Corrected Sentence 1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he off of student government.// Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit //Corrected Sentence 2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.//


 * DOL 18**

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding //Corrected Sentence 1: Walking quietly along the road, I wasn't able to see that speeding car.// Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here //Corrected Sentence 2: After the race begins, Delia took these medals to the track club at the school east from here.//


 * DOL 19**

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments //Corrected Sentence 1: "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."// Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early //Corrected Sentence 2: She was quite young -- no more than twenty-six -- when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.//


 * DOL 20**

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican //Corrected Sentence 1: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.// Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports //Corrected Sentence 2: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show "Classic Cars" reports.//


 * DOL 21**

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow //Corrected Sentence 1: Because it snowed heavily last night, so it's alright if no one comes to the basketball practice because of all the snow.// Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old //Corrected Sentence 2: They mentioned, "I believe that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.//


 * DOL 22**

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible //Corrected Sentence 1: Follow some simple rules, listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible and you'll succeed.// Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated //Corrected Sentence 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.//