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 * Daily Oral Language**

//Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.//

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Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice >> Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes in this team that believes that everyone has to practice.

Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment >> To ensure the success, they should require to have new lab equipment for those who are doing the experiment for the project.

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Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam >> Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, nut he wants an explanation for this exam.

Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project >> Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and also our long term project.

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Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had >> Yes Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had won.

Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish >> The program cacellation's effect which bothered us the most, was

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Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected >> Because you should have heard their voice when I told them how there vacation time would be be effected.

Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration >> Regardless of what Grandpa said it will be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.

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Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us >> Rob commented that our neighbours should be welcoming to children outside of our neighbourhood.

Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide >> Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did now know the definition of the world 'chide'.

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Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game >> Marcus is a serious athlete who tries very hard, I'm sure we'll see a lot of his action in today's game.

Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning >> The race between the three relay teams is close, none of the three, however, are giving up hope of winning.

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Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world >> Mr. P

Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners

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Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans >> My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.

Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert >> At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

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Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite >> My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.

Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information >> At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

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Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution >> Having read the novel, __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.

Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert >> Because, there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.

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Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country >> Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II maintained peace in that country. Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip >> Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Stella requested a plane ticket to the United States.

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Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia

Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted

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Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away

Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out

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Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil >> You should have followed these three steps: first; open the hood, second; check the level, and last; add more oil. Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together >> Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

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Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government >> Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government? Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit >> There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offence, and a winning spirit.

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Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding >> Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here >> After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club to the school located east of here.

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Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments >> "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early >> She was quite young- no more than twenty-six- when he earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

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Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican >> Yes, they're going to welcome whoever that wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican. Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports >> This car is a 1966 Mustang is extremely valuable these days regardless of what he reports in the TV show "Classic Car Reports".

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Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow

Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old

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Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated

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Quiz!

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Review quiz

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Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable >> The Titanic dragged more than 1,500 people into their graves, although it was believed to be unsinkable.

Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land >>

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Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly

Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library