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DOL #25  Revised 1: The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves. Revised 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem __The Waste Land __.
 * Original 1 **: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
 * Original 2 **: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land

DOL #26 Revised 1:Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the __Atlantic Monthly __, a renowned magazine. Revised 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel __The Plague __," Carmen said, "But it's not in our library."
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 1 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 2 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 20px; line-height: 29px;">DOL #27 Revised 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations. Revised 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 1 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 2 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 20px; line-height: 29px;">DOL #28 Revised 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope - the largest I have ever seen - to observe Halley's Comet. Revised 2: Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel all right now Walter? Can you go skiing?"
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 1 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
 * <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Original 2 **<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing


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Revised 1: When are these books due, Hans? Should I bring them to the library? Revised 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constituion of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
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 * Original 1**: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">**Original 1**: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Revised 1: Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. Revised 2: While half the class uses the Internet, the test will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.
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 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">**Original 1**: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Revised 1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft. Revised 2: My Mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
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 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming

Revised 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice, "Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated. Revised 2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
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 * Original 1**: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">**Original:** <span style="font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif;">ms paula jeffers campton paper company 18376 river drive minneaplois mn dear ms jeffers Ms. Paula Jeffers Campton Paper Company 18376 River Drive Minneaplois, MN Dear Ms. Jeffers,
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Revised 1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy. Revised 2: We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.
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 * Original 1**: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
 * Original 2**: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew

Revised 1: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help mom fix dinner. Revised 2: Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday, October 29.
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 * Original 1**: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
 * Original 2**: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29

Revised 1: Luisa brought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta. Revised 2: Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
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 * Original 1**: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
 * Original 2**: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry

Revised 1: Park rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth. Revised 2: After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically, forty years have passed, and bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
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 * Original 1**: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth
 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs

Revised 1: Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination. Revised 2: First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
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 * Original 1**: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests

Revised 1: Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop beach Yacht Club? Revised 2: The article "In search of Spanish Galleons" in the book __<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Shipwrecks __<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"> was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believed it will be found.
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 * Original 1**: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
 * Original 2**: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found

Revised 1: Neither Rasheed nor larry want their team's loss to suggest that team members didn't play well. Revised 2: Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school bu individual students, the student handbook was checked.
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 * Original 1**: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
 * Original 2**: <span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">** DOL #45 ** Original 1: it says here on the bottle label that the baddest reaction to this here medicine would be drowsiness so your alright Revised 1: It says on the bottle label that the worst reaction to this medicine would be drowsiness, so you're all right.<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"> Original 2: at the beginning of class ms.kenney took attendance assigns new work and homework was checked Revised 2: At the beginning of class Ms. Kenney takes attendance, assigns new work, and checks homework.