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DOL 3

Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice Correct: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe that everyone should practice. Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment Correct: To ensure success, the teachers should require- the ones doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam Correct:Darnel doesn't have a reason to question the those instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam. Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project Correct: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebook for class and for our long term project.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had Correct: Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time; we didn't know that she had. Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish Correct: The effect of the program cancellation, bothered most of the us, members, was by ending the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected Corrected: You should have heard their voices when I told them their vacation time would be affected. Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration Corrected: Regardless of what grandpa says, it will be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us Corrected: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children of our neighborhood. Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide Correct: Because we had not read the assignment, neither Ben nor I knew the definition of the word chide.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game Correct: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning Correct: The race between the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world Corrected: Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity." Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners Corrected: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans Corrected: Our Social Studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans. Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert Corrected: I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving tonight. Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution Corrected: Having read the novel __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert. Corrected: There were too many things to do, so I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, nor go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country Corrected: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain piece in that country. Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip Corrected: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States of America.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia Corrected: "I reviewed the book well and I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia. Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted Corrected. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away Corrected: He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high-school reunion because he lives too far away. Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out Corrected: Bob says that regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play, __Romeo and Juliet__, will be sold out.

DOL 16

Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil Corrected: You should have followed three steps: ; first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil. Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together Corrected: Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have a problem walking them together.

DOL 17

Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government Corrected: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government. Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit Corrected: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding Corrected: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see that speeding car. Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here Corrected: After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the east side of the school.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments Corrected: "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early Corrected: She was quite young, no more than 26, when she earned her doctorate; consequently she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican Corrected: Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican. Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports Corrected: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show, __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow Corrected: Because it snowed heavily last night, it was all right if no one comes to basketball practice. Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old Corrected: They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible Corrected: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible. Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated Corrected: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.