MLDOLQ1+JenniferN

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

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DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

__Sentence 1:__ mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice - Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe they should not have any practice. __Sentence 2:__ to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment - To ensure success, the management should require those - the ones doing the project - to have new lab equipment.

DOL 4

__Sentence 1__: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam - Darnel doesn't have any reason to question those instructions but he wants a explanation of that exam. __Sentence 2:__ me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project - Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.

DOL 5

__Sentence 1:__ yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had - Yes, Terri won the game; but at that time, we didn't know what she had won. __Sentence 2__: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish - The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered us the most, ended the project before we could finish.

DOL 6

__Sentence 1__: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected - You should have heard their voice because I told them how their vacation time would be affected. __Sentence 2__: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration - Regardless of what grandpa had said, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7

__Sentence 1__: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us - Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside our neighborhood. __Sentence 2__: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide - Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.'

DOL 8

__Sentence 1:__ marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game - Macus, a serious a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. __Sentence 2__: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning - The race among the three relay teams is close; none of the three teams is giving up hope of winning. DOL 9

__Sentence 1__: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world - Ms. Perez, the science teacher stated, "Within a short time free-election lasers will change the world as the inventions of electricity did." __Sentence 2__: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners - Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10

__Sentence 1__: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans - Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans. __Sentence 2__: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert - Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.

DOL 11

__Sentence 1__: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite - My older sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight. __Sentence 2__: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information - At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."

DOL 12

__Sentence 1__:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution - Having read the novel __The Man in the Iron Mask__, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. __Sentence 2__: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert - Because there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practicing my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13

__Sentence 1__: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country - Mr. Guarino told us that Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, maintained peace in that country. __Sentence 2__: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip - Having finished her foreign exchange trip, a plane ticket was requested to the United States.

DOL 14

__Sentence 1__: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia - "I reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report, said Sonia. __Sentence 2__: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted - "Although we have twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.

DOL 15

__Sentence 1__: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away - He was unable to attend our fiftteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away. __Sentence 2__: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out - Regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play __Romeo and Juliet__ will be sold out.

DOL 16

__Sentence 1__: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil - You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.

__Sentence 2__: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together - Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.

DOL 17

__Sentence 1__: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government - Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?

__Sentence 2__: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit - There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league; a terrific goalie, a great offense and a winning spirit.

DOL 18

__Sentence 1__: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding - Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. __Sentence 2__: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here - After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club located at east of the school.

DOL 19

__Sentence 1__: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments - "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." __Sentence 2__: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early - She was quite young--no more than twenty-six--when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

__Sentence 1:__ yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican - Yes, they are going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican. __Sentence 2__: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports - This car, 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what TV show, __Classic Cars__ reports.

DOL 21

__Sentence 1__: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow - Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one come to basketball practice. __Sentence 2__: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old - They mentioned that on January 2nd, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible

Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated